Rachel
November 1996 75p
20 pages A5 B&W
Rachel finds an unsettling letter from her ex just as Jo comes to stay...
Tony's first attempt at writing his own scripts is a very sparse and brooding tale about two girls' lives. Lots of post-teenage angst lifted up by the kind of scripting where panels of characters just staring at things have much more power than any dialogue or narration could give them. A very promising start way ahead of my expectations.
I always wanted to do a story about a sleepwalker. I've used the idea of the subconcious telling the concious what it doesn't want to hear in pretty much all my stories since.
